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What was the most boring movie you watched? Share your answer in a few sentences.

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The most boring movie I watched was ¡®Eternals¡¯. I looked forward to watching it because a Korean actor appeared in marvel movies for the second time. However, there were many heroes with no impact, so I can¡¯t focus on any of them. Even running time is too long.

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Hi, Judy!

I agree with some of your points raised here on your homework answer. The movie 'Eternals' had some character problems as well as storyline deficiency. Anyway, if it must have a sequel, then they have to take our suggestions seriously.

Anyway, I am so glad to see that your answer had become longer and more substantial. Your sentences were all correct with just very minimal suggestions. Keep up the good work in writing!

See you next week. Take care.

-T. Donna =)

The most boring movie I watched was ¡®Eternals¡¯. 
>> Correct!

I looked forward to watching it because a Korean actor appeared in marvel movies for the second time. 
>> Correct!
Or: Marvel

However, there were many heroes with no impact, so I can¡¯t focus on any of them. 
>> Correct!

Even running time is too long.
>> Even the running time is too long.
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