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What do you think about countries that ban or restrict the media?

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I disagree with the idea of banning media. I recently came across the news that the Russian government asked its¡¯ media not to include ¡°invasion¡± and ¡°aggression¡± in the article regarding the Ukraine invasion. Many countries¡¯ governments are now restricting traditional and non-traditional media sources. It could be human nature to reveal only good aspects of themselves to avoid criticism. It could also be a way to increase approval rating, which is common in a democratic society where everyone elects their president through the ballot, so public popularity matters. Therefore, many governments are restricting local and foreign media outlets by framing the information as fake news. However, it is suitable for journalists to release the article, including their opinions. Also, it is the readers¡¯ job to identify between rumor and information. This trend could contribute to transparency among society. Alongside this, it will lead to the empowerment of citizens¡¯ decision-making.

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I disagree with the idea of banning media. 
>>> correct   
I recently came across the news that the Russian government asked its¡¯ media not to include ¡°invasion¡± and ¡°aggression¡± in the article regarding the Ukraine invasion.
>>> correct     
Many countries¡¯ governments are now restricting traditional and non-traditional media sources. 
>>> correct    
It could be human nature to reveal only good aspects of themselves to avoid criticism. 
>>> correct    
It could also be a way to increase approval rating, which is common in a democratic society where everyone elects their president through the ballot, so public popularity matters.
>>> correct     
Therefore, many governments are restricting local and foreign media outlets by framing the information as fake news. 
>>>  correct   
However, it is suitable for journalists to release the article, including their opinions. 
>>> OR:  However, it is justifiable for journalists to release the article, including their opinions.
>>> OR: However, it is reasonable for journalists to release the article, including their opinions.   
Also, it is the readers¡¯ job to identify between rumor and information. 
>>> OR:  Also, it is up to readers¡¯ discretion to identify facts and rumors.   
This trend could contribute to transparency among society. 
>>> correct   
Alongside this, it will lead to the empowerment of citizens¡¯ decision-making.
>>> correct      
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