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How do celebrate children\'s day when you were young?

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When I was really young, parents gave me some gifts for chidren's day. But as I grow up, they didn't prepare any small gifts for me. However, I wasn't disappointed because we usually go eat out for dinner, so I always appreciate to them. I'm okay they don't give a gift for me.
After entering middle school, Children's day just became a vacation for my family. Children's day is May 5th, and Korean parents' day is May 8th, so we consider parents' day to more an important holiday. In Korea, in my opinion, parents' day is more important than Children's day.

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Happy Monday Yun Su!
It's nice that you were able to experience and celebrate Children's Day. Also, even without the gifts, at least you were thankful and appreciated you parents.
-T. Caitlyn
When I was really young, parents gave me some gifts for chidren's day. 
>>When I was really young, My parents used to give me gifts for Children's day.
But as I grow up, they didn't prepare any small gifts for me. 
>>But as I grow older, they don't prepare any gifts for me anymore.
However, I wasn't disappointed because we usually go eat out for dinner, 
>> I wasn't disappointed at them because we usually go out for dinner.
so I always appreciate to them. 
>>So I always appreciate them.
I'm okay they don't give a gift for me.
>>I'm okay even if they don't give me gifts.
After entering middle school, Children's day just became a vacation for my family.
>>After entering middle school, Children's Day just became a day for our family to go on a vacation.
Children's day is May 5th, and Korean parents' day is May 8th, 
>> Children's Day is on May 5th, and Korean Parent's Day is on May 8th.
so we consider parents' day to more an important holiday. 
>>So we consider Parent's Day as a more important holiday.
In Korea, in my opinion, parents' day is more important than Children's day.
>>OR: In my opinion, in Korea, Parent's day is more important than Children's Day.

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