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Who is your favorite animation character?

작성자: 김*환
2022-02-28 1262

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Unfortunately, I don't have a favorite animation charater, because I don't watch animation often, and also I don't like watching animation that much.
But I like to watch movie, especially marvel serial movies, because all of marvel movies form a huge marvel cinematic universe.
Above all, My favorite movie and character is 'Doctor Strange'.
To introduce the storyline, It is a story of genius arrogant doctor strange, become a wizard to fix his broken hands in an accident and protect Earth from 'dark dimension'.
I like him because I like the actor, Benedict Cumberbatch, And I'm interested about his super power.
He can make a tax evasion through 'slim ling', shield, a lot of weapons.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Paul,
Character animation is a specialized area of the animation process, which involves bringing animated characters to life. Animation provides real to life scenarios faced in daily life during learning. This learning uses methods of learning by viewing, doing, and coaching. This helps in practical skill development and better knowledge retention. Animation adds fun to learning and motivates one to look for more information to learn. Enjoy watching animation movies. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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Unfortunately, I don't have a favorite animation charater, because I don't watch animation often, and also I don't like watching animation that much.
>> Unfortunately, I don't have a favorite animation character because I don't watch animation often, and also I don't like watching animation that much.
But I like to watch movie, especially marvel serial movies, because all of marvel movies form a huge marvel cinematic universe.
>> But I like to watch movies, especially Marvel series movies because all of the Marvel movies form a huge Marvel Cinematic Universe.
Above all, My favorite movie and character is 'Doctor Strange'.
>> Above all, my favorite movie character is 'Doctor Strange'.
To introduce the storyline, It is a story of genius arrogant doctor strange, become a wizard to fix his broken hands in an accident and protect Earth from 'dark dimension'.
>> To introduce the storyline. It is a story of a genius arrogant doctor strange who becomes a wizard to fix his broken hands in an accident and protect Earth from the 'dark dimension'.
I like him because I like the actor, Benedict Cumberbatch, And I'm interested about his super power.
>>I like him because I like the actor, Benedict Cumberbatch, And I'm interested in his Superpower.
He can make a tax evasion through 'slim ling', shield, a lot of weapons.
>> He can make a tax evasion through 'slim ling', shield, and he has a lot of weapons.
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Unfortunately, I don't have a favorite animation charater, because I don't watch animation often, and also I don't like watching animation that much.
But I like to watch movie, especially marvel serial movies, because all of marvel movies form a huge marvel cinematic universe.
Above all, My favorite movie and character is 'Doctor Strange'.
To introduce the storyline, It is a story of genius arrogant doctor strange, become a wizard to fix his broken hands in an accident and protect Earth from 'dark dimension'.
I like him because I like the actor, Benedict Cumberbatch, And I'm interested about his super power.
He can make a tax evasion through 'slim ling', shield, a lot of weapons.
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