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작성자: 류*선
2022-03-01 1086

회원님의 영작문

During the season of Lent and Easter Sundays, we are going to have a "Re:" Series of worship themes. The Motto of the "Re:" Series is "See, I am doing a new thing! Then See, God is doing a new thing!"
"Re:" Series is a 40-day journey towards Resurrection and the invitation to our Lord, Jesus Christ, and his ministry. We will return to passages we’ve read many times. Yet, we will find new depths and explore real power of resurrection in our very lives.
Each theme of worship is going to be 1. Re:Turn 2. Re:Vive 3. Re:Build 4. Re:Deem 5. Re:New 6. Re:Store 7. Re:Member 8. Re:Pent 9. Re:Start 10. Re:Ssurection
I hope and pray that all members of Henderson experience transformative power of Jessu Christ through the Lent and Easter Sundays.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Han! It's been a long time! Here I am, I am blessed again to be given this chance to polish your sermon or probably an introductory speech. Time flies so fast and still God has still been so gracious to each and everyone of us! Have a good day! -Faith-
During the season of Lent and Easter Sundays, we are going to have a "Re:" Series of worship themes. 
>> During the Season of Lent and Easter Sundays, we are going to have a "Re:" Series of Worship Themes. 
OR During the Season of Lent and Easter Sundays, we would let the "Re:" series of worship themes enlighten us. 
The Motto of the "Re:" Series is "See, I am doing a new thing! Then See, God is doing a new thing!"
>> The Motto of the "Re:" Series is "See, I am doing a new thing! See, God is doing a new thing!"
"Re:" 
Series is a 40-day journey towards Resurrection and the invitation to our Lord, Jesus Christ, and his ministry. 
>> The "Re:" series is a 40-day journey towards the resurrection and the invitation of our Lord Jesus Christ, and his ministry. 
We will return to passages we’ve read many times. 
>> We will return to passages we’ve read many times. 
OR We will go over the passages we have read up on many times.
Yet, we will find new depths and explore real power of resurrection in our very lives.
>> Yet, we will find new depths and explore the real power of resurrection in our very lives.
OR Yet, more truths will be brought to light and Christ's resurrection would definitely empower us.
Each theme of worship is going to be 
>> Each theme of worship is going to be:
1. Re:Turn 
>> CORRECT
2. Re:Vive 
>> CORRECT
3. Re:Build 
>> CORRECT
4. Re:Deem 
>> CORRECT
5. Re:New 
>> CORRECT
6. Re:Store 
>> CORRECT
7. Re:Member 
>> CORRECT
8. Re:Pent 
>> CORRECT
9. Re:Start 
>> CORRECT
10. Re:Ssurection
>> CORRECT
I hope and pray that all members of Henderson experience transformative power of Jessu Christ through the Lent and Easter Sundays.
>> I hope and pray that all members of Henderson experience the transformative power of Jesus Christ through the Lent and Easter Sundays.
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