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What do you think are the different reasons for people to want to stay single instead of getting mar

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To get married, we need to prepare lots of things like money and house. Nowadays, the gap between rich and poor is getting bigger, so it makes unmarried people buy a new house to live in. Also, It is getting harder to get a new job for them. Unless they earn enough money, they cannot save money to get married, so it lets more hard condition to decide to marry.
There are good things to stay single. After getting married, they cannot find their freedom which can feel more comfortable.
However I want to marry someone. I don't want to die alone.

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Hi, Yun Su!
Thank you for taking the time to answer this question. I agree with you, there are a lot of things to consider in getting married and sometimes, these are the reasons why a person chooses to be single. However, being with someone you love is always better than all these reasons.
-T. Caitlyn
To get married, we need to prepare lots of things like money and house. 
>>CORRECT
Nowadays, the gap between rich and poor is getting bigger, 
>>OR: Nowadays, the gap between the rich and the poor is getting bigger.
so it makes unmarried people buy a new house to live in. 
>>So, it makes single people invest in buying a new house.
Also, It is getting harder to get a new job for them. 
>>OR: Also, it's getting harder for them to get a new job.
Unless they earn enough money, they cannot save money to get married,
>> Unless they earn enough money, they will not be able to save enough to get married.
so it lets more hard condition to decide to marry.
>>Because of these conditions, it's really hard to decide to get married.
There are good things to stay single. 
>>There are a lot of good reasons to stay single.
After getting married, they cannot find their freedom which can feel more comfortable.
>>An example, after getting married, they will have limited freedom which can make a person feel uncomfortable.
However I want to marry someone. 
>>CORRECT
I don't want to die alone.
>>CORRECT


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