무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Re:Turn - Ash Wednesday Sermon 1

작성자: 류*선
2022-03-02 518

회원님의 영작문

Ash Wednesday marks the beginning of Lent. We are here in the sanctuary to have Ash Wednesday worship service at the moment. And today is the beginning of Lent. The word ‘Lent’ is derived from the Latin word meaning “fortieth.” The Lenten season is the season of forty days. Why Lent is forty days? Jesus spent 40 days in the wilderness prior to beginning his ministry. He was in prayer and fasting for 40 days and nights. We, Christians, also spend 40 days preparing for Jesus' resurrection. Lent is a season of reflection and preparation before the celebrations of Easter. By observing the 40 days of Lent, we, Christians, participate in Jesus Christ’s sacrifice. At the end of Lent, we will go through the passion and death of Jesus Christ. For forty days, our reflection and observation of our journey to Easter is Jesus’ passion and death. We may all agree that we don’t want to talk about pain, suffering, or death in our daily lives. We just want to talk about fun bright spots or happiness.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Han! Thank you for this opportunity that I would be reminded of Jesus' sacrifice and love for us!-Faith-
Ash Wednesday marks the beginning of Lent. 
>> CORRECT
We are here in the sanctuary to have Ash Wednesday worship service at the moment. 
>> We are here in the sanctuary to have the Ash Wednesday Worship Service at the moment. 
OR In this sanctuary, the Lord will be in our midst as we proceed to the Ash Wednesday Worship Service. 
And today is the beginning of Lent. 
>> CORRECT
OR As I've mentioned, today is the official beginning of Lent.
The word ‘Lent’ is derived from the Latin word meaning “fortieth.” 
>> CORRECT
The Lenten season is the season of forty days. 
>> CORRECT
OR Lent is the period of forty days. 
Why Lent is forty days? 
>> CORRECT
OR Why is Lent 40 days long?
Jesus spent 40 days in the wilderness prior to beginning his ministry. 
>> Jesus spent 40 days in the wilderness prior to the beginning of his ministry. 
OR Looking back to the journey of Jesus in the wilderness, He was led by the Spirit there for forty days prior to the beginning of His ministry. 
He was in prayer and fasting for 40 days and nights. 
>> CORRECT
We, Christians, also spend 40 days preparing for Jesus' resurrection. 
>> We, Christians, also spend 40 days preparing for Jesus' resurrection. 
OR Therefore, we, as Christians, need 40 days as we make ready for Christ's resurrection.
Lent is a season of reflection and preparation before the celebrations of Easter. 
>> Lent is a season of reflection and preparation before the celebration of Easter. 
OR Lent represents 'season of reflection and preparation' for us before the celebration of Easter. 
By observing the 40 days of Lent, we, Christians, participate in Jesus Christ’s sacrifice. 
>> CORRECT
At the end of Lent, we will go through the passion and death of Jesus Christ. 
>> CORRECT
OR At the conclusion of the season of Lent, we will go through the passion and death of Jesus Christ. 
For forty days, our reflection and observation of our journey to Easter is Jesus’ passion and death. 
>> CORRECT
OR Our forty day journey will be more of meditation and observation about Jesus’ passion and death. 
We may all agree that we don’t want to talk about pain, suffering, or death in our daily lives. 
>> CORRECT
OR I know we would all rather put aside stories about pain, suffering, or death in our daily lives. 
We just want to talk about fun bright spots or happiness.
>> CORRECT
OR It's because we only desire to talk about real joy and the bright side of life.
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
117534 Homework 이*희 완료 2022-03-20 0
117533 homework 정*원 완료 2022-03-20 821
117532 Homework 정*혁 완료 2022-03-20 649
117531 Most valuable thing 이*경 완료 2022-03-20 667
117530 Homework 임*윤 완료 2022-03-20 0
117529 What are some things people can do to keep healthy? 한*형 완료 2022-03-20 602
117528 If you are working, what working schedule do you prefer and why? 서*영 완료 2022-03-20 1
117527 If you were to choose a church where you would be designated,... 류*선 완료 2022-03-20 663
117526 What do you hope for your own future? 류*선 완료 2022-03-20 770
117525 What motivates you to be part of our company (Bloomberg)? 문*현 완료 2022-03-19 450
117524 Good child 민*정 완료 2022-03-19 2
117523 2022.3.18 전* 완료 2022-03-19 987
117522 If you can learn another language, what would it be and why? 신*섭 완료 2022-03-19 840
117521 Homework 김*혁 완료 2022-03-18 669
117520 3/18 homework 이*유 완료 2022-03-18 759
117519 Homework 김*혁 완료 2022-03-18 545
117518 Do you have a different attitude to English homework now than... 김*인 완료 2022-03-18 844
117517 homework 김*연 완료 2022-03-18 765
117516 What is bread? How important is bread in your life? 태*서 완료 2022-03-18 784
117515 How do you deal with failure? 백*진 완료 2022-03-18 775

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]