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Re:Turn - Ash Wednesday Sermon 2

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Yet, we have to be honest with ourselves.Yes, it is a tough season. We should be very diligent in the practice and discipline of prayer and fasting. Some may argue that why we have to fast. Some may say why we have to pray. Some may just ignore the practice of Lent. I understand. I do understand. Because it is not easy. It is even tough and burdensome. But if there is no sacrifice, there is no forgiveness. If there is no pain, there is no gain. If there is Lent, there is no Easter.Henri Nouwen¡¯s ¡° An Ash Wednesday Prayer¡± is a good answer. Lent is the time of self-reflection. Lent is the time of self-discipline. Lent is the time that we stop and come to God. Lent is the time that we stop and lay ourselves bare before God. Lent is the time that we can check our direction. We can check where we are going. Sometimes we are going far, far away from God. Above all else, Lent is the time that we return to God. Our mortal body will return to dust. Since we are from dust. So we return to dust

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Again, hi, Han! I didn't change anything about Henri Nouwen¡¯s prayer! Please understand if I will only be able to edit your sermon 3 tomorrow. I promise, I will do it first thing in the morning!-Faith-
Yet, we have to be honest with ourselves.
>> CORRECT
OR However, we cannot deceive ourselves.
Yes, it is a tough season.
>> CORRECT
We should be very diligent in the practice and discipline of prayer and fasting. 
>> We should be very diligent in the practice and discipline of prayer and fasting. 
OR It is necessary to be persistent in the biblical practice and discipline of prayer and fasting.
Some may argue that why we have to fast. 
>> Some may argue why we have to fast. 
OR Some may pose a question about the essence of fasting.
Some may say why we have to pray. 
>> Some may ask why we have to pray. 
Some may just ignore the practice of Lent. 
>> CORRECT
OR Some may not understand the value of Lent observation.
I understand. 
>> CORRECT
I do understand. Because it is not easy. 
>> I do understand because it is not easy. 
It is even tough and burdensome. 
>> CORRECT
But if there is no sacrifice, there is no forgiveness. 
>> CORRECT
OR But forgiveness requires sacrifice.
If there is no pain, there is no gain. 
>> CORRECT
If there is Lent, there is no Easter.
>> CORRECT
Henri Nouwen¡¯s ¡°An Ash Wednesday Prayer¡± is a good answer. 
>> CORRECT
Lent is the time of self-reflection. 
>> CORRECT
Lent is the time of self-discipline. 
>> CORRECT
Lent is the time that we stop and come to God.
>> CORRECT 
Lent is the time that we stop and lay ourselves bare before God. 
>> CORRECT
Lent is the time that we can check our direction. 
>> CORRECT
We can check where we are going. 
>> CORRECT
Sometimes we are going far, far away from God. 
>> CORRECT
Above all else, Lent is the time that we return to God. 
>> CORRECT
Our mortal body will return to dust. 
>> CORRECT
Since we are from dust. So we return to dust
>> Since we are from dust, so we return to dust.
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