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Where is the United States of America? / Why do you want to travel to the United States of America?

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The United States is in North America it's on another side from Asia. The neighboring country is Canada, Brazil, and Colombia. I want to travel USA because I want to sightsee the Statue of Liberty, Times Square, and Hollywood, The place I really want to go to is Disneyland I think it'll be much more fun than a Korean amusement park.

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Hi Risa,
The United States of America is the world's third-largest country in size and nearly the third largest in terms of population. Located in North America, the country is bordered on the west by the Pacific Ocean and to the east by the Atlantic Ocean. Along the northern border is Canada and the southern border is Mexico. And it's really good to travel to the United States of America because Americans love having people visit their country. That's why the tourism industry in the United States is booming. Besides the popular attractions that most tourists visit, there are also tons of souvenir shops and small businesses that cater to guests from other countries. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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The United States is in North America it's on another side from Asia. 
>> The United States is located in North America, the country is bordered on the west by the Pacific Ocean and to the east by the Atlantic Ocean. 
The neighboring country is Canada, Brazil, and Colombia. 
>> The United States is bordered by Canada in the north, and Mexico in the south and these are the neighboring country of the USA. 
I want to travel USA because I want to sightsee the Statue of Liberty, Times Square, and Hollywood, 
>> I want to travel to the USA because I want to sightsee the Statue of Liberty, Times Square, and Hollywood
The place I really want to go to is Disneyland I think it'll be much more fun than a Korean amusement park.
>>  The place I really want to visit is Disneyland and I think it'll be much more fun than a Korean Amusement Park.
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The United States is in North America it's on another side from Asia. The neighboring country is Canada, Brazil, and Colombia. I want to travel USA because I want to sightsee the Statue of Liberty, Times Square, and Hollywood, The place I really want to go to is Disneyland I think it'll be much more fun than a Korean amusement park.
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