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What are some things that you always take with you on a trip?

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There are assistant batteries, phone chargers, medicines and ointment. It's because if my phone break down, I can't call someone when I'm on emergency. So I usually carry assistant batteries and phone chargers. And the reason I carry medicines and ointment is my body has some problems of health. So I always carry these things. I don't know what location on what date I will be sick.

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Hello Cindy!
That's right!  But instead of using assistant batteries, I think we use the expression "power banks" for extra phone batteries.  You are almost right with your patterns, but try to use the suggested ones to make your sentences look better.   ^^

~T. Maine

There are assistant batteries, phone chargers, medicines and ointment.
>>There are power banks, phone chargers, medicines, and ointment.
It's because if my phone break down, I can't call someone when I'm on emergency.
>>It's because if my phone breaks down, I can't call anyone in case of emergency.
So I usually carry assistant batteries and phone chargers.
>>So I usually carry some power banks or extra batteries and phone chargers.
And the reason I carry medicines and ointment is my body has some problems of health.
>>And the reason I carry medicines and ointment is for my body if it has some health problems.
So I always carry these things.
>>Correct.
I don't know what location on what date I will be sick.
>>I don't have any idea where or when I will get sick.  So I always need to be prepared.

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