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If I could make three wishes, first it would be corona goes away, second my family is all helthy and therd I can do English very good.

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Hello, Joy! ^^
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If I could make three wishes, first it would be corona goes away, second my family is all helthy and therd I can do English very good.
>>> If I could make three wishes, first it would be for coronavirus to already go away, second is for my family to be always healthy and third is for me to become good in English.
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