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What parts of Turkey have you visited?
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I was in Istanbul, and I went to the Bodrum last week.
The people were kind, and it was nice to have many restaurants and cafes on the beach and seat was too close to the sea.

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I was in Istanbul, and I went to the Bodrum last week.
>>>> I have visited Istanbul, I went to Bodrum last week.

The people were kind, and it was nice to have many restaurants and cafes on the beach and seat was too close to the sea.
>>> The people are kind, and it's a nice place because the restaurants and cafes are located near the beach and the seats are close to the shore.
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