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I want to be a middle school teacher because someone was teached by me and was remembered me
another reason is that teacher has good welfare in Korea
Teacher in Korea get money until to die by the goverment.
And why do I want to teach in middle school? Elementary school has too much young students, and high school has too much hard studying.
So, I want to be a middle school. Middle school is half.
If I became a teacher, I will teach mathemathics
Mathemathics is my favorite subject that I am best because my math test is always 100score.
But I can't do the others subjects,
Anyway, I would like to be a teacher.

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Hi Hanna,
Whatever may be going on in your life, whatever your dream or goal may be, having one will give you the motivation you need to get up. Knowing that there are dreams that you want to accomplish or achieve, or knowing that there are things you want to do to get there, serve as stimuli. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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I want to be a middle school teacher because someone was teached by me and was remembered me.
>> I want to be a middle school teacher because someone taught me and it become very memorable to me. 
another reason is that teacher has good welfare in Korea.
>> Another reason why I want to be a teacher someday is that teacher has good welfare in Korea.
Teacher in Korea get money until to die by the goverment.
>> Teachers in Korea have a retirement fee and pension given by the government until they die. 
And why do I want to teach in middle school? Elementary school has too much young students, and high school has too much hard studying.
>> And why do I want to teach middle school students it's because  Elementary school students are still very young, and high school students have are very difficult to teach because they are naughty and stubborn. 
So, I want to be a middle school. Middle school is half.
>> So, I want to be a middle school teacher someday because middle school students are just okay and I think they are easy to handle and teach. 
If I became a teacher, I will teach mathemathics
>> If I became a teacher, I will and want to teach mathematics. 
Mathemathics is my favorite subject that I am best because my math test is always 100score.
>> Mathematics is my favorite subject that I am best at because my math test is always a 100 or perfect score.
But I can't do the others subjects,
>> But I think it's hard for me to teach the other subjects. 
Anyway, I would like to be a teacher.
>> Anyway, I would like to be a teacher someday.
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I want to be a middle school teacher because someone was teached by me and was remembered me
another reason is that teacher has good welfare in Korea
Teacher in Korea get money until to die by the goverment.
And why do I want to teach in middle school? Elementary school has too much young students, and high school has too much hard studying.
So, I want to be a middle school. Middle school is half.
If I became a teacher, I will teach mathemathics
Mathemathics is my favorite subject that I am best because my math test is always 100score.
But I can't do the others subjects,
Anyway, I would like to be a teacher.
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