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The worst travel ever and the lesson.

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Traveling to Gangwondo, one of the coldest region in Korea was my worst travelling experience. It was in winter when there snowed a lot. My family and I traveled to Gangwondo to see snowy landscape of Gangwondo. But it must have been too cold to visit there. My parent's car suddenly stopped working. We were not able to do anything. Just on the snowy we just waited for insurance company to come and take us to the warm place。 My expectations totally broke up and it was a physically hard time. At that time I learned how the cold weather can harm people.

Teacher I have a question. 'While' is conjunctions, how can the gerund be located after that?
Shouldn't it change to 'During‘？
-->It is hard for me to fluently speak due to my habit of considering lots of things while speakin

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Hi, Sue! Oh... I can't imagine how you were feeling during that time. I hope it won't happen again. Anyway, regarding your question, generally, if you want to focus on an action that has a duration being in progress, use a while + a progressive tense.
For example, 'While I was washing the dishes, my wife came home.' Have a good day!-Faith-
Traveling to Gangwondo, one of the coldest region in Korea was my worst travelling experience. 
>> Traveling to Gangwondo, one of the coldest regions in Korea, was my worst travelling experience. 
It was in winter when there snowed a lot. 
>> It was in winter when it snowed there a lot. 
My family and I traveled to Gangwondo to see snowy landscape of Gangwondo. 
>> My family and I traveled to Gangwondo to see its snowy landscape.
But it must have been too cold to visit there. 
>> But, it must have been too cold to visit there. 
My parent's car suddenly stopped working. 
>> My parents' car suddenly stopped working/running. 
We were not able to do anything. 
>> We were not able to do anything. 
Just on the snowy we just waited for insurance company to come and take us to the warm place.
>> Unfortunately, on that snowy day, we just waited for the insurance company to come and take us to a warm place.
My expectations totally broke up and it was a physically hard time. 
>> My expectations were totally broken and it was a physically hard time.
At that time I learned how the cold weather can harm people.
>> At that time, I learned how the cold weather can harm people.
Teacher I have a question. 'While' is conjunctions, how can the gerund be located after that?
>> Teacher, I have a question, 'while' is conjunction, so how can the gerund be located after that?
Shouldn't it change to 'During‘？
>> Shouldn't it be changed to 'during‘？
-->It is hard for me to fluently speak due to my habit of considering lots of things while speakin
>> It is hard for me to fluently speak due to my habit of considering lots of things while speaking.
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