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What is your all-time favorite movie and what can you learn from it?

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2022-03-10 930

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many variety of movies influenced to me. and stories of the movies are similar with my piece of life and my ideal life.
my favorite movie is "ABOUT TIME". It's a romance movie. it's a story that a man who can control time tries to confess his love to a woman and they fell in love together in the end. actually in a latter part of movie, it focuses on a definition of happiness. and i am impressed with it. it says that happiness comes from a moment of right now and the moment together with my people i love. so live the moment fully. i cannot agree with the opinion more. after watching that movie, my motto of life is to spend the time given to me significantly and sincerely.

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Hi John!
 
Wow, that's very inspiring. It is rich in lessons about life. I might watch it. Thanks! 

PS: Always make sure that the first letter in a sentence should be capitalized. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

many variety of movies influenced to me. 
>> There is a wide variety of movies that influenced me. 

and stories of the movies are similar with my piece of life and my ideal life.
>>Those stories have a similar piece in my ideal life. 

my favorite movie is "ABOUT TIME". 
>> My favorite one is the movie, "About Time". 

It's a romance movie. 
>> CORRECT

it's a story that a man who can control time tries to confess his love to a woman and they fell in love together in the end. 
>> It's a story of a man who can control time and confesses to the woman that he loves. They fell in love together in the end. 

actually in a latter part of movie, it focuses on a definition of happiness. and i am impressed with it. 
>> Actually , n a latter part of movie, it focuses on the definition of happiness and I was impressed. 

it says that happiness comes from a moment of right now and the moment together with my people i love. 
>> It says that happiness comes from a moment of right now and the moments together with people that I love. 

so live the moment fully. i cannot agree with the opinion more. 
>> This is why we should live every moment fully. I can't agree with it more. 

after watching that movie, my motto of life is to spend the time given to me significantly and sincerely.
>> After watching that movie, my motto in life is to spend the time given to me significantly and sincerely.

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