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1. I dislike going to the movies by myself.
2. We want to eat dinner in a fancy restaurant.
3. I can't buying my own house in Korea.
4. I used to watch that television show all the time.
5. I always eat breakfast before going to school.
6. Where do you play the piano?
7. My grandmother reads science fiction books.
8. My teacher said my essay needs to correct.
9. I want to see if she is in a bad mood.
10. Our neighbour smokes cigarrette.

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Good evening Vicky! Thank you for your tenacity! ^_^
T. Irene
1. I dislike going to the movies by myself.
>>> Correct. 
2. We want to eat dinner in a fancy restaurant.
>>> Correct. 
3. I can't buying my own house in Korea.
>>> I can't buy my own house in Korea.
4. I used to watch that television show all the time.
>>> Correct.
5. I always eat breakfast before going to school.
>>> Correct.
6. Where do you play the piano?
>>> Correct.
7. My grandmother reads science fiction books.
>>> Correct.
8. My teacher said my essay needs to correct.
>>> My teacher said my essay needs correcting.
9. I want to see if she is in a bad mood.
>>> Correct.
10. Our neighbour smokes cigarrette.
>>> Correct.

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