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Who do you think is the best candidate for president during this election in South Korea and why?

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I think the best candidate for president during this election in South Korea was Ahn Cheol-soo.
I thought that he is the best person for president and my family thought so, but he resigned.
So my parents were not able to elect him.
So there is a little regret because of it.

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Hi John!
 
Oh, I've never heard about this candidate before. I'll look him up.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I think the best candidate for president during this election in South Korea was Ahn Cheol-soo.
>> I think the best candidate for president of South Korea this election was Ahn Cheol-soo.

I thought that he is the best person for president and my family thought so, but he resigned.
>> Me and my family thought that he was perfect for the position but he resigned. 

So my parents were not able to elect him.
>> CORRECT

So there is a little regret because of it.
>> There is a little regret because of this. 
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