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I want to go camping with my family.

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I want to go camping with my family.
That is because the family will protect me.
My second reason is my friends are going camping with their family too.
My third reason is when I go camping, there is very dark. So my family will help me.
Finally, I can play with my family.

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Hi, Joey! It is indeed enjoyable to go camping with our families and friends. I hope you could go camping with your loved ones often. 

- Teacher Debbie 

I want to go camping with my family.
>> This is a good sentence.

That is because the family will protect me. 
My second reason is my friends are going camping with their family too.  My third reason is when I go camping, there is very dark. So my family will help me. Finally, I can play with my family.
>> That is because my family can protect me. It is dark at the campsite; hence they can help me. I can also play with them when we go camping. Just like me, my friends go camping with their families, too.


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