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Without social media apps, the world would be stuck in the past. People will keep writing letters. And you may also be unfamiliar with the term cyberbullying. Nothing bothers me on social media.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Without social media apps, the world would be stuck in the past. 
>>> CORRECT!

People will keep writing letters. 
>>> CORRECT!

And you may also be unfamiliar with the term cyberbullying. 
>>> CORRECT!

Nothing bothers me on social media.
>>> CORRECT!
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