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What is your reaction now that Yoon Seok-youl is the new president of South Korea? What do you think

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I was not interested about the new president, so I don't care about it.
But what I can tell obviously is I don't think that this situation is a great situation.
Actually, I think he doesn't know how the country is going on.
So a lot of people disappointed when he was disgusting about now situations with other candidates.
I don't think that he is a bad person, but I think he doesn't know some parts of this country.
That is what I am worrying about this situation.

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Hi John!

I think the same way as you. 
 
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I was not interested about the new president, so I don't care about it.
>> CORRECT

But what I can tell obviously is I don't think that this situation is a great situation.
>> But what I can tell obviously is that I don't think that this situation is great. 

Actually, I think he doesn't know how the country is going on.
>> Actually, I think he doesn't know how to handle the country. 

So a lot of people disappointed when he was disgusting about now situations with other candidates.
>> This is why there are many people who are disappointed when he was discussing about the situations of other candidates. 

I don't think that he is a bad person, but I think he doesn't know some parts of this country.
>> CORRECT

That is what I am worrying about this situation.
>> That is what I am worried about this situation.

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