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Do you believe in aliens? Why or why not?

No, I don't believe in aliens. Because I have never seen aliens. I don't believe any existence that I have never experienced. There are a lot of proof that aliens exist in the universe. But there's no way to know if that's true. So I won't believe it until I actually see it.

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Hi Won!

 I think the same way too! To see is to believe, right? 
 
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

No, I don't believe in aliens. Because I have never seen aliens. 
>> No, I don't believe in aliens because I have never seen one before. 

I don't believe any existence that I have never experienced. 
>> I don't believe in any existence that I have never experienced. 

There are a lot of proof that aliens exist in the universe. 
>> There are a lot of proof that aliens exist in the universe but there's no way to know if that's true. 

But there's no way to know if that's true. 
>> CONNECT THE STUDENT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE. 

So I won't believe it until I actually see it.
>> CORRECT
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