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1.I think I need to buy four- door refrigerator with a large capacity, because mytwo- door refrigerator was used by a person I know a long time ago and is old and not enough for my family to use.
2. I think I need to buy a new T.V because there was no T.V in my house yet.
3. I think I need to buy a new flute because I am thinking of raising the flute level.

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1. I think I need to buy four-door refrigerator with a large capacity, because mytwo- door refrigerator was used by a person I know a long time ago and is old and not enough for my family to use.
>>>>  I think I need to buy a four-door refrigerator with a large capacity because we have been using our two-door refrigerator for a long time and it is not enough for my family to use.
2. I think I need to buy a new T.V because there was no T.V in my house yet.
>>>  I think I need to buy a new T.V because there is no T.V in my house yet.
3. I think I need to buy a new flute because I am thinking of raising the flute level.
>>> I think I need to buy a new flute because I am thinking of raising my skill level in playing the flute.
 
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