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Do you also consider yourself as a perfectionist? Why or why not?

작성자: 류*선
2022-03-14 824

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I don't consider myself a perfectionist because I often see my mistakes in my life. However, I try to do my best in my duty. Also, I have a meticulous style. If I have more energy physically, I want to make my life perfect. I know my desire wants to become a perfectionist. But perfection can sometimes make me more successful, on the other hand, it can also make me hard on myself. Especially, when I speak English, I often hesitate because I don't want to show people my mistakes. Before action, I always think deeply. When I learn English for the first time, people usually advise me that just speak! It made me hard. I didn't know how to express my thought in English at all. I avoided places where had to speak English with people. I wanted to speak English when I was ready to make sentences by myself with confidence. I know people around me are waiting for me to speak English anything. I really would like to conversate in English fluently with people. But It's a very hard process for me.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jane! Gaining confidence is never easy. However, with experience and more learnings, it will be developed. Just be patient!-Faith-
I don't consider myself a perfectionist because I often see my mistakes in my life. 
>> CORRECT
However, I try to do my best in my duty. 
>> CORRECT
OR I try to do my duty to the best of my ability.
Also, I have a meticulous style. 
>> CORRECT
If I have more energy physically, I want to make my life perfect. 
>> CORRECT
I know my desire wants to become a perfectionist. 
>> I know my desire is to become a perfectionist. 
But perfection can sometimes make me more successful, on the other hand, it can also make me hard on myself. 
>> CORRECT
Especially, when I speak English, I often hesitate because I don't want to show people my mistakes. 
>> CORRECT
OR Especially, when I speak English, I am reluctant to speak because I don't want others to see my flaws.
Before action, I always think deeply. 
>> Before acting, I always think deeply. 
When I learn English for the first time, people usually advise me that just speak! 
>> When I learn English for the first time, people usually advise me to just speak! 
It made me hard. 
>> It made me feel hard
I didn't know how to express my thought in English at all. 
>> CORRECT
I avoided places where had to speak English with people. 
>> I avoided places where I had to speak English with people. 
I wanted to speak English when I was ready to make sentences by myself with confidence. 
>> CORRECT
I know people around me are waiting for me to speak English anything. 
>> I know people around me are waiting for me to speak about something in English.
I really would like to conversate in English fluently with people. 
>> I really would like to conversate in English fluently with people. 
But It's a very hard process for me.
>> CORRECT
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