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What\'s your favorite art form?

작성자: 류*선
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I like landscapes or abstract paintings. When I lived in Washington DC, I often went to the museums. There is a free museums a lot. I have enjoyed it. Especially when I see landscapes paintings, it made me comfortable and peaceful. I think It has the power of nature. Also, when I see an abstract painting, it can help to grow my imagination. Sometimes I don't understand their abstract painting has what's the mean. But it doesn't matter to me. I just enjoy imagining by myself. My daughter and I often are painting in our house. My daughter really enjoys that with me. I just help her to express her emotions and thought through them. I think that It looks like nothing, but It has significance. Art is a good tool to express our mindset well. I also find out my though and emotions through them. In addition, We often paint people who appeared in the Bible with their situations. My daughter can approach and learn Bible easier through this process.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I am really amazed about your story, Jane! May you always enjoy your art session with your daughter while studying about the Bible. See you later!-Faith-
I like landscapes or abstract paintings. 
>> I like landscape or abstract paintings. 
When I lived in Washington DC, I often went to the museums. 
>> CORRECT
There is a free museums a lot. 
>> There are lots of free museum admissions there.
I have enjoyed it. Especially when I see landscapes paintings, it made me comfortable and peaceful.
>> I enjoyed it especially when I see landscape paintings, they made me comfortable and peaceful.
I think It has the power of nature. 
>> I think it has the power of nature. 
Also, when I see an abstract painting, it can help to grow my imagination.
>> Also, when I see an abstract painting, it can help my imagination grow.
Sometimes I don't understand their abstract painting has what's the mean. 
>> Sometimes, I don't understand the meaning of their abstract paintings. 
But it doesn't matter to me. 
>> But, it doesn't matter to me. 
I just enjoy imagining by myself. 
>> CORRECT
My daughter and I often are painting in our house. 
>> My daughter and I often paint in our house. 
My daughter really enjoys that with me.
>> CORRECT
OR She really enjoys that with me.
I just help her to express her emotions and thought through them. 
>> I just help her to express her emotions and think through them. 
I think that It looks like nothing, but It has significance. 
>> I think that it looks like nothing, but it has significance.
Art is a good tool to express our mindset well. 
>> Art is a good tool to express our minds well.
I also find out my though and emotions through them. 
>> I also find out my thoughts and emotions through them. 
In addition, We often paint people who appeared in the Bible with their situations. 
>> In addition, we often paint people who appeared in the Bible with their situations. 
My daughter can approach and learn Bible easier through this process.
>> My daughter can approach and learn about the Bible easier through this process.
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