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Where do you usually go when the weather is good?
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We usually try to go to the nearest beach to the East Sea because my daugher loves to play with the fine sands on the beach, my wife like to see the blue sea and listen to the sound of waves, And most importantly I can enjoy watching them feeling happiness. This scene is what a man wish to see.

I coughed a lot for the last two days. And I¡¯m still coughing. Today, I won¡¯t be able to talk more than 5 minutes. Whenever I try to say, I cough more because I have to inhale the air more than when I just breathe. So, I hope you understand the situation I¡¯m in. Call me after

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I hope you can do that activity very soon! I'm sure that you and your  family will really enjoy it. 

Sure, I will call you later. I will you later and also to check if you are doing fine. I really hope you get better very soon. No need to worry. I totally understand your situation. :)
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We usually try to go to the nearest beach to the East Sea because my daugher loves to play with the fine sands on the beach, my wife like to see the blue sea and listen to the sound of waves, And most importantly I can enjoy watching them feeling happiness.
>> We usually try to go to the nearest beach to the East Sea because my daughter loves to play with the fine sands on the beach, my wife like to see the blue sea and listen to the sound of waves, And most importantly I can enjoy watching them feeling happiness.
This scene is what a man wish to see.
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