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I think the most important policy is going to school at time.
And I have to obey the laws of the country.
Because you don't go to school, I think you're not student.
Also you can't go to school unless you obey the national law.

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Hello Chae Yeong!
I understand your idea.  But going to school means you learn many things about ethics and morals not only knowledge and information.  Some people don't go to school or cannot go to school, but they still abide the laws of the country.  As a student, you should follow the rules and regulations of your school and your home.  ^^


~T. Maine

I think the most important policy is going to school at time.
>>I think the most important policy is going to school on time.
And I have to obey the laws of the country.
>>Correct.
Because you don't go to school, I think you're not student.
>>It is because if you don't go to school, I think you are not considered a student.
Also you can't go to school unless you obey the national law.
>>Also, you go to school to learn and obey the national law.

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