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Do you watch TV or do you prefer to stream from the internet?

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First of all, I can pick the videos that I want regardless of the time or day. I can search for diverse videos on Youtube or Google about my interests. However, if I watch TV, I need to spend a lot of time finding the channel. Also, if I want to watch a drama or an entertaining program, I should wait. In addition, some people can feel bored or annoyed waiting for the next episode. Therefore, the streaming internet is better than the TV due to the limited channel or program, and bored feeling.
Moreover, the internet is more accessible. I use the computer and iPad every day when I work or study; therefore, it is convenient to search for information or enjoy watching videos. I need to be indoors if I watch TV shows. Furthermore, it uses more electric energy than mobile devices. A smartphone or tablet PC can be used by charging 1-2 hours, but when I watch TV, it uses a lot of electric energy in succession. Consequently, stream internet is more eco-friendly and easy to access.

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Hi there Jin!
You got the idea!  Our generation is so fortunate to have these gadgets nowadays.  There is no problem with electric current in case there are sudden power shortage situations.  Everybody can watch on their devices anywhere any time. ^^

~T. Maine


First of all, I can pick the videos that I want regardless of the time or day.
>>Correct.
 I can search for diverse videos on Youtube or Google about my interests.
>>Correct.
However, if I watch TV, I need to spend a lot of time finding the channel.
>>Correct.
 Also, if I want to watch a drama or an entertaining program, I should wait.
>>Correct.
In addition, some people can feel bored or annoyed waiting for the next episode.
>>Correct.
Therefore, the streaming internet is better than the TV due to the limited channel or program, and bored feeling.
>>Correct.
Moreover, the internet is more accessible.
>>Correct.
I use the computer and iPad every day when I work or study; therefore, it is convenient to search for information or enjoy watching videos.
>>Correct.
I need to be indoors if I watch TV shows.
>>Correct.
Furthermore, it uses more electric energy than mobile devices.
>>Correct.
>>OR: In addition, it consumes more electricity than other devices.
A smartphone or tablet PC can be used by charging 1-2 hours, but when I watch TV, it uses a lot of electric energy in succession.
>>Correct.
Consequently, stream internet is more eco-friendly and easy to access.
>>Consequently, streaming the internet is more eco-friendly and easier to access.

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