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Favorite book character

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My favorite book character is Park Soo-jin. She is from my favorite Korean comic book, socks monster. She is my favorite because she is main character, has lots of siblings, and has a boyfriend that is cat (it is fantasy). Also she has pet monsters and they are very cute.

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Hi Layla!^^ 

Have you heard about Flotsam and Jetsam?
They are the eels that Ursula owns from The Little Mermaid. 
They were not my favorite but the names are really cool! 
There's even a restaurant that has been named after them!^^ 

Teacher Andrea

My favorite book character is Park Soo-jin. 
>> Correct 

She is from my favorite Korean comic book, socks monster. 
>> She is from my favorite Korean comic book, Socks Monster. 

She is my favorite because she is main character, has lots of siblings, and has a boyfriend that is cat (it is fantasy). 
>> She is my favorite because she is the main character. She has a lot of siblings and has a cat boyfriend (it is a fantasy). 

Also she has pet monsters and they are very cute.
>> Also, she has pet monsters and they are very cute. 
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