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Hi Andrea!

I like catfish same as you! We cook it as stew and roast in Korea. The reason why I laughed earlier is that when you said you like catfish I guess you like its apperance. So I thought does she like it because it looks after cat? No way. She doen't like any creatures who have fur!

The topic was enough to make me frustrated.
But I'm trying to realize that I did my best.
Thank you for caring and lead me this time
I'm always grateful to you. Seriously :)


+ I finally got what you were saying earlier.
I agree with you. That's what I meant!
The movie, Catfish is about young people who have been abused by other people and who have worried about their future in Korea. So if you were young Korean you must sympthsize with and enjoy it! (I don't think it's not different from there.. unfortunately.)
That's why many people like the movie.
Becuase it's about our real life!

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Hi Q^^ 

It's funny that you remembered that I don't like furry animals. haha 
I just like grilled catfish. If the catfish has been cooked in a different way, I will not eat it. 
Something's really wrong with me, I guess??

Teacher Andrea

I like catfish same as you! 
>> Correct 

We cook it as stew and roast in Korea. 
>>We cook it stew or grill it in Korea. 

The reason why I laughed earlier is that when you said you like catfish I guess you like its apperance. 
>> The reason why I laughed earlier was  that when you said you like catfish, I guessed you like its appearance. 

So I thought does she like it because it looks after cat? 
>> So in my mind, I asked myself,  "Does she like it because it looks like a cat? " 

No way. She doen't like any creatures who have fur!
>> No way. She doesn't like any creatures with fur!

The topic was enough to make me frustrated.
>> Correct 

But I'm trying to realize that I did my best.
>> Correct 

Thank you for caring and lead me this time
>> Thank you for caring and leading me up to this time. 

I'm always grateful to you. Seriously :)
>> Correct :)

+ I finally got what you were saying earlier.
>> Correct 

I agree with you. That's what I meant!
>> Correct 

The movie, Catfish is about young people who have been abused by other people and who have worried about their future in Korea. 
>> The movie, Catfish is about young people who have been abused by other people and they also worry about their future in Korea. 

So if you were young Korean you must sympthsize with and enjoy it! (I don't think it's not different from there.. unfortunately.)
>> So if you were a young Korean you must sympathize with and enjoy it! (I don't think it's not different from there.. unfortunately.)

That's why many people like the movie.
>> That's why many people liked the movie. 

Becuase it's about our real life!
>> It is about our real life! 


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