¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

If you were a celebrity, what kind of movie would you like to do? Why?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ½Å*Áø
2022-03-17 698

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

If I were a celebrity, I would like to do historic movie. I like watching historic movie. I like it's own atmosphere. In those kinds of movies, there are traditional backgrounds and fantasy which is imagined by the writers. They brings out the most attractive story. So If I were an actress, I would like to be those beautiful stories' component. And there are lots of charming costumes that cannot be seen in modern society. I would like to wear those kind of costumes too. Specially, in Korea, there are Korea's traditional clothes which is called 'Hanbok'. In modern society only in special days Korean can wear that. But, still those kinds of Hanbok is not real traditional clothes but changed for comfortableness. So I want to feel real tradition Hanbok and Hair style. It seems like really attractive experience. Furthermore there are lots of sad but beautiful story in Korean historical drama and movie. We call it 'Han' which means sad but beautiful feeling. I do love it, I want to act that.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Sue! I think you can portray that role well. I also like it when you show your patriotism towards your country. See you!-Faith-
If I were a celebrity, I would like to do historic movie. 
>> If I were a celebrity, I would like to do a historical movie. 
I like watching historic movie. 
>> I like watching historic movies. 
I like it's own atmosphere. 
>> I like its own atmosphere. 
In those kinds of movies, there are traditional backgrounds and fantasy which is imagined by the writers. 
>> In those kinds of movies, there are traditional backgrounds and fantasy which are imagined by the writers. 
They brings out the most attractive story. 
>> They bring out the most attractive story. 
So If I were an actress, I would like to be those beautiful stories' component. 
>> So, if I were an actress, I would like to be those beautiful stories' components. 
And there are lots of charming costumes that cannot be seen in modern society. 
>> In addition, there are lots of charming costumes that cannot be seen in modern society. 
I would like to wear those kind of costumes too. 
>> I would like to wear those kinds of costumes too. 
Specially, in Korea, there are Korea's traditional clothes which is called 'Hanbok'. 
>> Especially, in Korea, there is a type of traditional clothes which is called 'Hanbok'. 
In modern society only in special days Korean can wear that. 
>> In modern society, Koreans only wear that on special days.
But, still those kinds of Hanbok is not real traditional clothes but changed for comfortableness. 
>> But, still those kinds of Hanbok are not real traditional clothes because they were changed to be comfortable.
So I want to feel real tradition Hanbok and Hair style. 
>> So, I want to feel the real traditional Hanbok and hair style. 
It seems like really attractive experience. 
>> It seems like a really attractive experience. 
Furthermore there are lots of sad but beautiful story in Korean historical drama and movie. 
>> Furthermore, there are lots of sad but beautiful stores in Korean historical dramas and movies. 
We call it 'Han' which means sad but beautiful feeling. 
>> We call it 'Han' which means sad but a beautiful feeling. 
I do love it, I want to act that.
>> CORRECT
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
118464 4.20 homework Çö*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-04-24 474
118463 Rural area. ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-24 527
118462 The credit card ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-24 2
118461 If you can change something about your lifestyle, what would it... ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2022-04-23 522
118460 Email ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-23 6
118459 What is importance of English language. ±è*¼º ¿Ï·á 2022-04-23 417
118458 Email format ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-23 6
118457 Interrupt conversation ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-23 11
118456 homework °¨*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-23 1
118455 How to make spaghetti sauce ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-23 9
118454 2022.4.22 Àü* ¿Ï·á 2022-04-23 406
118453 4/22 homework ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 454
118452 What is the best part of weekend vacation? What\'s the worst? ±è*Áö ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 494
118451 HOMEWORK ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 3
118450 How is the Internet affecting our intelligence? Describe your... ±è*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 490
118449 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 471
118448 part 2 ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 441
118447 Why do we need weekends? What are your plans for this weekend? ÅÂ*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 481
118446 What restaurant in your country do you recommend a foreigner to... ¹é*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 495
118445 My Homework °­*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 324

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04