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In 3-5 sentences, please answer the question:
Do you enjoy going to amusement parks?

Yes, but I go to the amusement parks only once. Because in the Turkey, amusement park is do not have much

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Hi Anne! 

I hope that there will be more amusement parks there in Turkey because they are so fun. You can enjoy them with family and friends. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

Yes, but I go to the amusement parks only once. 
>> Yes, but I have only been to an amusement park once. 

Because in the Turkey, amusement park is do not have much
>> It is because there aren't much amusement parks here in Turkey. 
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