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If you can learn another language, what would it be and why?

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If I can do it, I would learn the French and German. There is an aircraft manufacturer in France. It's the Airbus. And there is an engine manufacturer of aircraft in Germany. It's the Rolls-Royce. You may know that Rolls-Royce is a car company. It also make an engine, too. :)

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Hi Elic! 

Oh, I didn't know that! I thought they only sold luxurious cars. Thanks for the information. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

If I can do it, I would learn the French and German. 
>> If I can do it, I would like to learn how to speak in French and German. 

There is an aircraft manufacturer in France. 
>> CORRECT

It's the Airbus. 
>> CORRECT

And there is an engine manufacturer of aircraft in Germany. 
>> CORRECT

It's the Rolls-Royce.
>> CORRECT

 You may know that Rolls-Royce is a car company. 
>> CORRECT

It also make an engine, too. :)
>> They also make engines. :) 
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