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Dear Don,

Two weeks ago, Our new president was elected by korea people. this time, we elected the president of oppostion party.
I think, Covid 19 increased a lot now, it is not for election day. because of Omicron virus, especially Stells Omicron. I understand you are warry about election day of your country. because of this event, many people will come same place even though it is pandemic.
but if they wear mask, I sure there is no problem. but withour mask, it will be spread a lot. Omicron infacted rate is very high, so all people will be infected by Omichron. I think, you want to go there. but be careful, I heard from my friend. he said, Omichron was not serious symptum, but some case was very pain. you maybe be a pain case.

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Hi Andrew!

See you in a bit and thank you for this composition.

T. DON

Dear Don,

Two weeks ago, Our new president was elected by korea people. this time, we elected the president of oppostion party.
>> Two weeks ago, our new President was elected by the Korean people. This time, we elected the President of the Opposition party.


I think, Covid 19 increased a lot now, it is not for election day. because of Omicron virus, especially Stells Omicron. I understand you are warry about election day of your country. because of this event, many people will come same place even though it is pandemic.
>> I think Covid 19 cases will increase a lot because of the coming election in your country. It is because of the Omicron virus easily transmit the virus to people. I understand that you worry about the election in your country because many people will go out even though it is pandemic to support their Presidential candidate.


but if they wear mask, I sure there is no problem. but withour mask, it will be spread a lot. Omicron infacted rate is very high, so all people will be infected by Omichron. I think, you want to go there. but be careful, I heard from my friend. he said, Omichron was not serious symptum, but some case was very pain. you maybe be a pain case.
>> But if they wear their mask, I'm sure there will be no problem. But without it, it will spread fast. Omicron's infection rate is very high so all people will be infected by it. I think you want to go out and support your Presidential candidate but be careful. According to the experts, Omicron doesn't show serious symptoms. In some cases, it shows serious symptoms.
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