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Good day, Ms. Kyu!

This is indeed a very happy birthday for your husband! Thanks to you and all of your preparations. As you have said, this is his birthday that you will celebrate in your country as you will be going to Canada soon. It is good to create very good memories so that you can take them with you wherever you go.

I am grateful for your answer to the homework. I think this was a screen shot but then, great effort in making very good sentences! Study my suggestions below. You have done so well!

See you later in class.

-T. Donna =)

We had a birthday party in the evening. 
>> Correct!

I cooked food and bought cake. 
>> Correct!

The cake is strawberry cake, very delicious. 
>> Correct!
Or: The cake is a strawberry cake, it was very delicious!

We song happy birthday to husband and we watched tv together.
>> We sang a happy birthday to my husband and we watched tv together.

We had a enjoy time.
>> We had an enjoyable time.

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