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What was the best advice you have received and who gave it to you?

I learned a lot from a professor at the university. He not only guided me to the world of microbiology, but also kept me motivated and told me good words like "You are smart and can do everything you want." even though my grades were between C and D. But he kept telling me lots of encouraging words. And I could finally believe in myself. Two years later when I was a junior student, I got the first place in the midterm exam with 6A+ and 1A0 in the first semester.

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Hi, U Seung!

It's nice to have people around you that motivates you to be better. Things might be very tough, but you did very well because you worked hard and you had good advisors. 

Thank you for making time in answering the question. Have a great night!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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I learned a lot from a professor at the university.
>> Correct!  
He not only guided me to the world of microbiology, but also kept me motivated and told me good words like "You are smart and can do everything you want." even though my grades were between C and D. 
>> He hasn't only guided me to the world of microbiology, but also kept me motivated and told me good words like "You are smart and can do everything you want." even though my grades were  C and D. 
But he kept telling me lots of encouraging words. 
>> Correct!  
And I could finally believe in myself. 
>> Correct!  
Two years later when I was a junior student, I got the first place in the midterm exam with 6A+ and 1A0 in the first semester.
>> Correct!  
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