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What do you think is the best TV show and why?

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I have to say It's the Infinite Challenge at MBC broadcasting station. It's a program where famous comedians like Yoo Jae Seok and Park Myoung Soo come out. When I was young, I used to watch it a lot on every Saturday. but there are some members who did drink to drive and to gamble. so It's not airing right now.

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Hi Elic! 

I've never seen that show before. It sounds very interesting. I'll look it up. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I have to say It's the Infinite Challenge at MBC broadcasting station. 
>> I have to say it's the "Infinite Challenge" at the MBC broadcasting station. 

It's a program where famous comedians like Yoo Jae Seok and Park Myoung Soo come out. 
>> CORRECT

When I was young, I used to watch it a lot on every Saturday. 
>> CORRECT

but there are some members who did drink to drive and to gamble. 
>> Although there are some members who did drunk driving and gambling so the show is not being aired right now. 

so It's not airing right now.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE. 

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