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Tell me something about your country? / What do you like about your country?

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2022-03-28 523

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Let me introduce my country our country is in Asia near China and Japan. South Korea has a long history, nowadays we can often see the remains in parts of the street. Famous one that many foreigners are finding when they are traveling in Seoul it's Jongno because there is a castle the king and queen were living also there are a hot place for young people. I like my country because I think the people in Korea have warmhearted and its a good country to live in there is no probability to be shot or terrorism moreover Korea is democracy so the people are the masters of the country. so I love my country and it was the reason why I love my country,

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Risa,
South Korea can be a very safe place to live in and work which is why there are so many people taking advantage of the country's opportunities. Korean people have some great cultural traits. Korean people are very friendly to foreigners and always very willing to help. One of the interesting, fun facts about South Korea is that it is a popular destination for medical tourism, specifically cosmetic surgery. It's one of the world's highest plastic surgeries done per capita. People come from all across the globe to enhance their looks during a short trip to South Korea. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)

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Let me introduce my country our country is in Asia near China and Japan. 
>> Let me introduce my country. South Korea is in East Asia near China and Japan. 
South Korea has a long history, nowadays we can often see the remains in parts of the street.
>>South Korea has a long history, nowadays we can often see the remains in any part of the street in our country.
 Famous one that many foreigners are finding when they are traveling in Seoul it's Jongno because there is a castle the king and queen were living also there are a hot place for young people. 
>>  A famous one that many foreigners are looking for and always visit when they are traveling in Seoul City is the Jongno-gu because there is a castle where the king and queen were living and also there is a hot place for young people. 
I like my country because I think the people in Korea have warmhearted and its a good country to live in there is no probability to be shot or terrorism moreover Korea is democracy so the people are the masters of the country. so I love my country and it was the reason why I love my country.
>> I like my country because I think the people in  South Korea are warmhearted and it's a good country to live because there is no probability to be shot or terrorism moreover South Korea is a democratic country so the people are the masters of the country. So, I love my country and those are the reason why I love my country so much. 


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Let me introduce my country our country is in Asia near China and Japan. South Korea has a long history, nowadays we can often see the remains in parts of the street. Famous one that many foreigners are finding when they are traveling in Seoul it's Jongno because there is a castle the king and queen were living also there are a hot place for young people. I like my country because I think the people in Korea have warmhearted and its a good country to live in there is no probability to be shot or terrorism moreover Korea is democracy so the people are the masters of the country. so I love my country and it was the reason why I love my country.
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