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Do you think Seoul City is a nice place to live in? Yes or No and Why?

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Seoul city is a good place to live is because first our country's public peace is good and it's safe from terror. Second, our country are developed and developing very fast so the system surrounding people are really modern and new technological. Lastly, the greatest thing about living in Seoul is the internet, Seoul internet is really fast than all other countries.

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Hi Risa,
Seoul is one of the safest big cities in the world. The state education system is also of a high standard, focusing on science and mathematics, as well as English and Korean. Seoul boasts its tall high-rises but this city is sure to not forget its cultural roots. Seoul is still peppered with sites of hanoks (the traditional Korean house) and has preserved the palaces in the city. ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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Seoul city is a good place to live is because first our country's public peace is good and it's safe from terror. 
>> Seoul city is a good place to live in because first our country's public places are peaceful and good as well as it's safe from terrorism. 
Second, our country are developed and developing very fast so the system surrounding people are really modern and new technological. 
>> Second, South Korea is a well-developed country and developing countries are very fast so the system surrounding the people is really modern and a new technological country. 
Lastly, the greatest thing about living in Seoul is the internet, Seoul internet is really fast than all other countries.
>>Lastly, the greatest thing about living in Seoul is the internet, Seoul South Korea has the fastest average internet connection in the world compared to other countries.
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Seoul city is a good place to live is because first our country's public peace is good and it's safe from terror. Second, our country are developed and developing very fast so the system surrounding people are really modern and new technological. Lastly, the greatest thing about living in Seoul is the internet, Seoul internet is really fast than all other countries.
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