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my best restaurant is "teras".teras is serve steak.there steak is very delicious.I like there.and my family like there too.

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Hi Do Hyeon! 

Wow. That sounds like a great restaurant. Their menu is scrumptious. 

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my best restaurant is "teras".
>> The best restaurant in my town is "Teras". 

teras is serve steak.
>> They serve steak there. 

there steak is very delicious.
>> Their steak is very delicious. 

I like there.and my family like there too.
>> Me and my family like eating there. 
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