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Writing Task (Mar 28th, 2022)

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Where is the best place to go camping in your country?
Actually, there're a few places near where I live now. Since the COVID-19 outbreak, going camping has become one of the most favorite hobbies that Koreans enjoy. Though YouTube, you can easily find how much we, Koreans love to camp. Anyway, the most popular place in the city is just less than 10 minutes by driving from my home. The name of the place is "Dalseo Starlight Camping" because it's run by Dalseo-District Office and you can see the hundreds of stars clearly without binoculars at night. But it's very difficult to reserve the Camping place as it's too popular, so the campers even living way far from the place come to spend days at the camp site. And I've never been to there yet because I couldn't reserve, but I've been trying to reserve there on the Internet.

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Hi, U Seung! 

Wow! I guess the people in your country have found a new pastime. It would be fun if you can go there with your family. 

Thank you for sharing! 

~T. Roanne ^_^
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Actually, there're a few places near where I live now. 
>> Correct! 
Since the COVID-19 outbreak, going camping has become one of the most favorite hobbies that Koreans enjoy. 
>> Correct! 
Though YouTube, you can easily find how much we, Koreans love to camp.
>> Through YouTube, you can easily find how much we, Koreans love to camp.
Anyway, the most popular place in the city is just less than 10 minutes by driving from my home. 
>>Anyway, the most popular place in the city is only less than a 10 minute drive from my home.
The name of the place is "Dalseo Starlight Camping" because it's run by Dalseo-District Office and you can see the hundreds of stars clearly without binoculars at night. 
>> Correct! 
But it's very difficult to reserve the Camping place as it's too popular, so the campers even living way far from the place come to spend days at the camp site.
>> But it's very difficult to reserve the Camping place as it's too popular, so the campers even living way far from the place come to spend days at the campsite.
And I've never been to there yet because I couldn't reserve, but I've been trying to reserve there on the Internet.
>> And I've never been there yet because I couldn't reserve, but I've been trying to reserve there on the Internet.
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