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What is the best gift you have ever received and why is it so special?

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I remember getting the best gift that is couple rings. When I first got a girlfriend, I got it as a 100th anniversary gift. It was pure gold. But after I broke up with my girlfriend, I realized it wasn't pure gold when I sold it. :)

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Hi Elic! 

Your answers always make me laugh. What an experience. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I remember getting the best gift that is couple rings. 
>> I remember that the best gift that I have received is a couple ring. 

When I first got a girlfriend, I got it as a 100th anniversary gift. 
>> CORRECT

It was pure gold. 
>> CORRECT

But after I broke up with my girlfriend, I realized it wasn't pure gold when I sold it. :)
>> But after I broke up with my girlfriend, I realized that it wasn't pure gold when I sold it. :)

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