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Do you suffer from nightmares? Can you remember any specific nightmare?

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2022-03-31 467

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I suffered from nightmares when I was sleeping today. Actually, It's not real nightmare, but it was a thing that I don't want to suffer.
Because of Covid 19, my university is closed, so my roommate cannot come inside. Therefore, I'm always nervous nowadays because I don't know when she come here.
So I'm going to tell you today's nightmare. When I was sleeping, my new roommate came this room. But as you know, yesterday I didn't sleep very well, so sleeping was so precious for me. I didn't wake up and I kept sleeping as ignoring her. It was my mistake. Also, I late next class, I didn't attend it. When I got up, the time was over...
And then, I really woke up in real situation, and there was only 3 minutes to start a class... Fortunately, I didn't late, but that feelings made me not good until now. I think it's because yeseterday I didn't sleep well. It's real. It has happend today. After sumitting this homework, I will go to sleep right away.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yun Su! 
Thank you for doing your homework. It is still a good thing that this nightmare that you had is something you can easily forget. It's just scary because it can really happen in real life but hopefully not.
I suffered from nightmares when I was sleeping today. 
>>I suffered from a nightmare when I slept today. 
Actually, It's not real nightmare, but it was a thing that I don't want to suffer.
>>Actually, It's just similar to nightmares because it's something that I don't want to suffer.
Because of Covid 19, my university is closed, 
>>CORRECT
so my roommate cannot come inside. 
>>So my roommate cannot enter the dormitory.
Therefore, I'm always nervous nowadays because I don't know when she come here.
>>Therefore, I'm always nervous nowadays because I don't know when she will arrive.
So I'm going to tell you today's nightmare. 
>>CORRECT
When I was sleeping, my new roommate came this room. 
>>While I was sleeping, my new roommate came.
But as you know, yesterday I didn't sleep very well, so sleeping was so precious for me. 
>>CORRECT
I didn't wake up and I kept sleeping as ignoring her. 
>>I didn't wake up and kept sleeping and just ignored her.
It was my mistake.
>>CORRECT
Also, I late next class, I didn't attend it. 
>>Also, i was late for my next class. I wasn't able to attend it.
When I got up, the time was over...
>>When I got up, class was over.
And then, I really woke up in real situation, and there was only 3 minutes to start a class...
>>Then I suddenly woke up from my dream and there was only 3 minutes left before the start of my class.
 Fortunately, I didn't late, but that feelings made me not good until now.
>>Fortunately, I wasn't late but that dream gave me a bad feeling.
 I think it's because yeseterday I didn't sleep well. 
>>I think that's because I didn't sleep well yesterday.
It's real. 
>>CORRECT
It has happend today.
>>It happened today. 
After sumitting this homework, I will go to sleep right away.
>>After submitting this homework, I will go to sleep right away.

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