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What is the best restaurant in your town and what do they serve there?

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What is the best restaurant in your town and what do they serve there?

There is a famous French restaurant in our town.
There aren't many places which French homecooked food is served in our country.
That's why it is a special restaurant for me.
Also, there is delicious food although it is expensive.
There is a long line of people waiting to eat the food.

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Hi Monica! 

That sounds good! I love French cuisines especially pasta. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

There is a famous French restaurant in our town.
>> CORRECT

There aren't many places which French homecooked food is served in our country.
>> There aren't many French cuisine restaurants here in our country. 

That's why it is a special restaurant for me.
>> This is why this restaurant is special for me. 

Also, there is delicious food although it is expensive.
>> Also, their food there is delicious, although it is expensive.

There is a long line of people waiting to eat the food.
>> There is a long line for people waiting to eat. 

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