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Hi Andrea.
It has been a week. Omg..
I'm not 100% okay today but I don't want to spend a week away without class.
I promised you that I would be better tomorrow. But I failed. I thought I would be.
I'm sorry for that. Today I wanted to tell you first about it. But I missed it. One more time Sorry!!

Thank you for welcoming me.
And thank you for worring about me.
You are the one of the few people who worried about me. Because now In Korea, people think the virus just as cold and some say it's nothing! even people who has been already infected and even my father. They did't have serious symptom like me :(

To some people it's right but to some it's not.
You know.

Now I will pray with you for you and the people you love.

Be careful. To the Endemic!
Have a good weekend ^^

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Hi Q!^^ 

I know, it's been a long time. 
I am happy that you feel better now. :) 
I actually missed talking and listening to you. 
Hoping that this pandemic will end soon and scientist can already fid a cure for the virus. 

Having few people that cares for us in life is better than having a lot but who don't really care. 

Andrea 

It has been a week. Omg..
>> It has been a week, OMG. 

I'm not 100% okay today but I don't want to spend a week away without class.
>> Correct 

I promised you that I would be better tomorrow. But I failed. I thought I would be.
>> I promised you that I would be better tomorrow , but I am not as I thought I would be. 

I thought I would be.
>> Correct 

I'm sorry for that. 
>> Correct (That's okay. ) 

Today I wanted to tell you first about it. But I missed it. 
>> Today, I want to tell you about it first but I missed teh chance. 

One more time Sorry!!
>> Another apology! 

Thank you for welcoming me.
>> Correct 

And thank you for worring about me.
>> And thank you for worrying about me. 

You are the one of the few people who worried about me. 
>> You are one of the few people who got worried about me. 

Because now In Korea, people think the virus just as cold and some say it's nothing! even people who has been already infected and even my father. 
>> Here in Korea, people think that the virus is just like a common cold and some say it's nothing even if there are so many people who were infected including my father
  

They did't have serious symptom like me :(
>> They didn't have a serious symptom like me. :( 

To some people it's right but to some it's not.You know.
>> As you know, to some people, it's okay but for teh others, it's not.  

Now I will pray with you, for you and the people you love.
>> Correct 

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