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I usually eat the ordered foods once or twice a week.

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I think the meaning of this question is how often I have meals that we made ourselves or ordered. If it¡¯s right, I usually eat the ordered foods with my family once or twice a week. My family doesn¡¯t want to cook on weekends. They each live hard for a week and they want to take a rest on weekends or holidays. Eating the ordered food is how to rest for my family. But I like to eat the food that is cooked by my wife or my elder son. My younger son and I don¡¯t cook well, and we usually help the cook or wash the dishes after meals. The advantages of this are that we can eat more and we can save money. Nevertheless I should order the food and pay for that. Because I really want to live with my family happily and respectfully. I hope you know this is half joking and half serious.

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Hi Elliot!!

Thank you again for answering the homework religiously. Actually, this question means: When you go to restaurants, do you often take out the food or do you dine in the restaurant. I guess it is not applicable to you since when Koreans go to restaurants, they usually dine in and if not, they just have the food delivered rather than going to the restaurant and then taking the food out. 

Anyway, your answers were still really entertaining! For the corrections, there were no big issues. Again, avoid starting your sentences with "But" and "Because". Also, please note when to use hyphens (-).
On your next homework, please avoid starting the sentences with "And," "But", and "Because".

'Till next time!
-Teacher Violet.

I think the meaning of this question is how often I have meals that we made ourselves or ordered.
>>CORRECT!

 If it¡¯s right, I usually eat the ordered foods with my family once or twice a week. 
>>CORRECT!

My family doesn¡¯t want to cook on weekends. 
>>CORRECT!

They each live hard for a week and they want to take a rest on weekends or holidays. 
>>CORRECT!

Eating the ordered food is how to rest for my family. But I like to eat the food that is cooked by my wife or my elder son. 
>> Eating the ordered food is how to rest for my family but I like to eat the food that is cooked by my wife or my elder son. 
OR >> Eating the ordered food is a form of rest for my family but I like to eat the food that is cooked by my wife or my elder son.
 
My younger son and I don¡¯t cook well, and we usually help the cook or wash the dishes after meals. 
>> My younger son and I don¡¯t cook well, and we usually help cook or wash the dishes after meals. 

The advantages of this are that we can eat more and we can save money.
>>CORRECT!

Nevertheless I should order the food and pay for that. Because I really want to live with my family happily and respectfully. 
>> Nevertheless I should order the food and pay for that because I really want to live with my family happily and respectfully. 

I hope you know this is half joking and half-serious.
>>I hope you know this is half-joking and half-serious.
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