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Describe a time when you told your friend an important truth.

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I have many experiences where I have to tell the truth to friends. If I choose only one happening, that has occurred a few years ago with my one of best friends. My friend ran a business with my idea without my approval. I was so upset and disappointed with that. So I think I should talk with her and my feeling, but I'm a reserved person so I really considered it. At first time, I didn't want to say this to her because I didn't want to make an awkward and uncomfortable situation. However, a bit angry and disagreeable emotions kept, and I think it can ruin our friendship. So I said my feeling to her truly, and I wanted to recover our relations. But it couldn't make a better situation. I talked to her genuinely about what I felt and how we deal with this, but it wasn't clear. She didn't respond positively to what I said. I had to show fake emotions, so I wanted to release the stress from the wrong emotions. From this experience, I have learned lying is sometimes better in some situations

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Hello Jin!
"The truth will set you free."  As friends, we all want to know the truth because it means trust that makes the relationship stronger. Keep on sharing your thoughts! ^^


~T. Maine


I have many experiences where I have to tell the truth to friends.
>>Correct.
If I choose only one happening, that has occurred a few years ago with my one of best friends.
>>If I choose only one happening, it has occurred a few years ago with one of my best friends.
My friend ran a business with my idea without my approval.
>>Correct.
I was so upset and disappointed with that.
>>Correct.
So I think I should talk with her and my feeling, but I'm a reserved person so I really considered it.
>>So I think I should talk with her with my feelings, but I'm a reserved person so I really considered it first.
At first time, I didn't want to say this to her because I didn't want to make an awkward and uncomfortable situation.
>>At first, I didn't want to say this to her because I didn't want to make an awkward and uncomfortable situation.
However, a bit angry and disagreeable emotions kept, and I think it can ruin our friendship.
>>However, a bit anger and negative emotions kept can ruin our friendship.
So I said my feeling to her truly, and I wanted to recover our relations.
>>So I told her my feelings so we could recover our relationship.
But it couldn't make a better situation.
>>But it couldn't make the situation better.
I talked to her genuinely about what I felt and how we deal with this, but it wasn't clear.
>>Correct.
She didn't respond positively to what I said.
>>Correct.
I had to show fake emotions, so I wanted to release the stress from the wrong emotions.
>>Correct.
From this experience, I have learned lying is sometimes better in some situations
>>Correct.

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