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Do you think people feel different when they wear different clothes? Why?

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I think it makes most people feel different. For me, if I wear different clothes it will make me feel like I become a different person and take selfie about outfit of the day.

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Hello Hye Yeon!
Thanks for accomplishing your composition homework! See you next time! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

I think it makes most people feel different. 
>>CORRECT
For me, if I wear different clothes it will make me feel like I become a different person and take selfie about outfit of the day.
>>For me, if I wore different clothes it would make me feel like I've become a different person and take a selfie of my outfit of the day.
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