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1. She learned Russian at the age of 45.
2. The book was written by Mark Twain.
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4. We can only get to the camp on foot.
5. What are you talking for?
6. She always gets up early in the morning and goes to bed late at night.
7. You have to pay for the tickets on the day you order them.
8. The old man suffered from COVID-19.
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Good evening Vicky. You're doing good. Keep it up! ^_^
T. Irene
1. She learned Russian at the age of 45.
>>> Correct. 
2. The book was written by Mark Twain.
>>> Correct. 
3. I¡¯ll show you the picture of the palace.
>>> Correct. 
4. We can only get to the camp on foot.
>>> Correct. 
5. What are you talking for?
>>> What are you talking about?
6. She always gets up early in the morning and goes to bed late at night.
>>> Correct. 
7. You have to pay for the tickets on the day you order them.
>>> Correct. 
8. The old man suffered from COVID-19.
>>> Correct. 
9. Please write with a pencil.
>>> Correct. 
10. It¡¯s from time you told him the truth.
>>> It¡¯s about time you told him the truth.


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