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My Favorite Thing about Myself

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My favorite thing about myself is bright personality. It helps in too formal atmosphere with people I see the first time. The atmosphere is a little relaxed and I can close quickly with them. Of course, it is an advantage with my friends. They said "If you are in meeting, then it will be more fun." On second thought, my favorite thing is not bright personality but sociability. I don't bright in continue, all day.

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Hi Kate!
That's exactly what I like about you.
Your personality really shines through in our classes.
I hope you'll stay the same.
I'll see you later.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My favorite thing about myself is bright personality. 
>> My favorite thing about myself is my bright personality. 
It helps in too formal atmosphere with people I see the first time.
>> It helps in situations when the atmosphere is too formal and with people whom I meet for the first time.  
The atmosphere is a little relaxed and I can close quickly with them. 
>> The atmosphere would be a little relaxed and I can become close with them quickly.
Of course, it is an advantage with my friends. 
>> Correct
They said "If you are in meeting, then it will be more fun." 
>> They said to me one time, "If you are in a meeting, then it will be more fun." 
On second thought, my favorite thing is not bright personality but sociability. 
>> On second thought, my favorite thing is not my bright personality but my sociability.
I don't bright in continue, all day.
>> I can't stay bright for the whole day. 
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