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What\'s the best thing about your parents?

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The best thing about my parents is that they always think me first. If they find good things they always think me before they enjoy them. For example, when they go to a clothing store, they used to buy some clothings for me before they enjoy the shopping.
Also they totally respect my opinion and what I want to do. And they support me. It¡¯s really reassured.
I¡¯m so happy that I meet my parents and I respect them. If I burn again, I want to be a daughter of my parents

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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


The best thing about my parents is that they always think me first. 
>> The best thing about my parents is that they always think about me first. 
OR >> The best thing about my parents is that, they think about my needs first.
If they find good things they always think me before they enjoy them. 
>> If they find good things they always think of me before they enjoy them. 
For example, when they go to a clothing store, they used to buy some clothings for me before they enjoy the shopping.
>> CORRECT!
Also they totally respect my opinion and what I want to do. 
>> Also, they totally respect my opinion and what I want to do. 
OR >> They also respect my opinion and my decisions.
And they support me. 
>> They give their endless support.
OR >> They endlessly support me.
It¡¯s really reassured.
>> CORRECT!
I¡¯m so happy that I meet my parents and I respect them. 
>> I¡¯m so happy that I they are my parents and I respect them. 
If I burn again, I want to be a daughter of my parents
>> If I will be born again, I want to be their daughter.
OR >> If I will be born again, I would still choose them as my parents.
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